firework is amazing

This week we have been Writing about the Persuasion and I think firework
is amazing and you Want  to see my  firework amazing here is it       Firework is amazing

I think firework shouldn't be band Because the firework is Explode  at the Night time and fireworks. Explode to All the colour All Night  time

It fun I watch it explode Because the fireworks  is Amazing and

Cool My baby sister Walk to the  fireworks and my mom Take her away.

The fireworks could light when it is dark How We  buy the fireworks Because my Dad Have A lot of money Because he works very hard.

One of the firework  Was super  loud !!! it  makes my ear Bleeding

And Scare me Super super super  Scare me and my Dad Friend come to My house